Instructions from the Clan Chief

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Instructions from the Clan Chief
   If ever the ships come to break our clan
      And carry you away,
   Remember your first days: You had to learn
      The strength in gales,
The long work carved from the long sky in rain.

   Remember the storm season when your mind
      Grasped the words for how
   We kept tight the new ice knives, and how we turned
      Their shavings out.
We held such words that the whole clan is bound.

   Cut from your brain, cut with sharpened ice
      The hours you wept for home
   Or threatened to call lightning down from space.
      If you must go,
Teach Earth truly the two worlds are close.
18 September 2007
I think this is my best poem so far, but people seem to have trouble understanding it. Imagine a lone human stranded on an ice world and taken in by the alien natives. The poem is intended to have enough information for you to infer the motivation for each thing the chief says.